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原创《鬼月亮》久不来了,问候北美枫的朋友

低处的迷雾
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Posted: 2011-01-09 15:52:08 Post subject: 原创《鬼月亮》久不来了,问候北美枫的朋友

原创《鬼月亮》文低处的迷雾光溜溜的狼嚎掀开阴凉的墓地鬼月亮爬出来脱掉的湖水稀薄成煞白的闪烁我看见垃圾张灯结彩飞得太高太有看头添画得周遭全都动摇被拆除的血园子一直下雨把我的优美变成陷阱小耗子鲜艳得丢了魂儿上窜下跳假装疯魔小眼睛睁着贼贼的光差点把我吓死的大灾晃荡着泥浆里的麻线和广场最后的衣裳撕毁于妄求的花香与马蹄我还假装文静地念一声哈利路亚我的枯萎集合硝烟和旧址稳不住的空气和天象让我摸到的峡谷滑进破镜框蹦出来的男妖精从我的哀哭里阅读舞蹈并疼爱我彻夜不眠的灰烬和肮脏 _________________ 写诗就是灵魂在私奔。那些风中的道路，我一一痛过的伤口，已被跋涉的脚步止住了腥酸。博客： http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1236291191

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Posted: 2011-01-09 18:21:07 Post subject:

的确有点鬼气

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Posted: 2011-01-13 21:02:08 Post subject:

联想丰富，意象独特。 _________________ 晴宝儿

低处的迷雾
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Posted: 2011-02-08 19:31:44 Post subject:

感谢白水晴宝儿.问候新年好！ _________________ 写诗就是灵魂在私奔。那些风中的道路，我一一痛过的伤口，已被跋涉的脚步止住了腥酸。博客： http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1236291191

韩少君
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Posted: 2011-02-11 22:19:00 Post subject:

魔幻------ _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

金金
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Posted: 2011-02-12 00:05:19 Post subject:

感觉能成画，问好。 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

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