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尘世有感 <一> 大風雪

白云闲人
探花

Joined: 26 Aug 2007
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白云闲人Collection

Posted: 2011-01-08 19:45:28 Post subject:

桂殿秋 - 大風雪寒气荡，乱飈狂，呼啸横斜白茫茫。風乘雪势掀重浪，雪仗風威灑八方。 _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

胡恢宗
秀才

Joined: 15 Mar 2008
Posts: 564

胡恢宗Collection

Posted: 2011-01-08 20:47:01 Post subject:

风乘雪势，雪仗风威。寒横四野气宏恢。-----词风大气豪放。问老师好。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕林深鸟竞飞

墨望山
童生

Joined: 12 Feb 2007
Posts: 25

墨望山Collection

Posted: 2011-01-08 21:02:03 Post subject:

此此狂放不羁，在下学习了~

王君明
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Joined: 03 Apr 2007
Posts: 250
Location: 甘肃天水
王君明Collection

Posted: 2011-01-09 07:18:14 Post subject:

烟吞四野寒气荡，风雪漫天莽蒼蒼! 兄保重啊 _________________ 虚拟网络　真实生活

qinghongh
榜眼

Joined: 14 Oct 2007
Posts: 4110

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Posted: 2011-01-09 07:40:45 Post subject:

白云老师对大风雪的描写很逼真啊！

黄洋界
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Joined: 23 Mar 2007
Posts: 3301
Location: 多伦多,加拿大
黄洋界Collection

Posted: 2011-01-09 09:04:36 Post subject:

写得威寒逼人，感同身受！ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

白云闲人
探花

Joined: 26 Aug 2007
Posts: 3466

白云闲人Collection

Posted: 2011-01-09 09:31:40 Post subject:

謝謝胡恢宗点评！ _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

白云闲人
探花

Joined: 26 Aug 2007
Posts: 3466

白云闲人Collection

Posted: 2011-01-09 09:32:56 Post subject:

謝墨望山欣赏！ _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

白云闲人
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Posts: 3466

白云闲人Collection

Posted: 2011-01-09 09:34:32 Post subject:

謝謝王君明关心！問好！ _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

白云闲人
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Posts: 3466

白云闲人Collection

Posted: 2011-01-09 09:36:07 Post subject:

謝謝庆宏勉励！ _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

白云闲人
探花

Joined: 26 Aug 2007
Posts: 3466

白云闲人Collection

Posted: 2011-01-09 09:38:41 Post subject:

黄兄，加東天气如何？問好！ _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

黄洋界
探花

Joined: 23 Mar 2007
Posts: 3301
Location: 多伦多,加拿大
黄洋界Collection

Posted: 2011-01-09 13:59:26 Post subject:

答白云兄：加东也是大雪纷飞，漫天皆白， “忽如一夜春风来，千树万树梨花开”啊。 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

白水
大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
白水Collection

Posted: 2011-01-09 16:00:46 Post subject:

近日加拿大风雪不断，令人不由提笔。老师的雪写的大气。

白云闲人
探花

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Posts: 3466

白云闲人Collection

Posted: 2011-01-10 08:11:31 Post subject:

謝黄兄！好个：忽如一夜春风来，千树万树梨花开！ _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

白云闲人
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Posts: 3466

白云闲人Collection

Posted: 2011-01-10 08:18:44 Post subject:

謝白水欣赏！眺望漫天飞雪，挥毫满笺诗絮！ _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

冰清
同进士出身

Joined: 29 Mar 2007
Posts: 1921

冰清Collection

Posted: 2011-01-10 20:39:12 Post subject:

風乘雪势，雪仗風威。真可谓搅得周天寒彻。造境，又造势。欣赏!

白云闲人
探花

Joined: 26 Aug 2007
Posts: 3466

白云闲人Collection

Posted: 2011-01-11 07:20:54 Post subject:

謝冰清欣赏、点评！是啊！这一場风雪真大！ _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

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