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七绝 · 观鱼

胡恢宗
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Posted: 2010-12-26 06:34:08 Post subject: 七绝 · 观鱼

观鱼半月浣云清见底，锦鳞赤冠互依依。溜边一尾何孤独，似愧红稀着素衣。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕林深鸟竞飞

白云闲人
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Joined: 26 Aug 2007
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Posted: 2010-12-26 07:54:50 Post subject:

覌鱼題诗，生活情趣。泼墨挥毫，景意荟萃！ _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

冰清
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Joined: 29 Mar 2007
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Posted: 2010-12-26 08:49:40 Post subject:

音韵和谐，神情俱在。转结像有点突然，似否可斟酌一下。

笑聊
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Joined: 05 Jan 2010
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Posted: 2010-12-27 00:56:16 Post subject:

观鱼而感慨：似愧红稀着素衣。还望胡兄宽怀！问好。

胡恢宗
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Posted: 2010-12-27 05:10:54 Post subject:

感谢三位老师点评。上下两联对比强烈，大概是观鱼人看到的实际情况吧！至于是不是作者的主观感受，那就另当别论了。大概在有无之间吧。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕林深鸟竞飞

胡恢宗
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Posted: 2010-12-27 17:47:28 Post subject:

“物以类聚，人以群分。”应该是个中性概念，它既可指“臭味相投，清者远之。” 也可指“竹林七贤，俗人却步。”如“素”字既可指“白衣”也可指“白丁”。故诗无达诂，随人当时的感受，见仁见智。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕林深鸟竞飞

白水
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Posted: 2010-12-28 15:32:12 Post subject:

寥寥数语，情景相融。就是过谦了些

胡恢宗
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Posted: 2010-12-28 17:42:16 Post subject:

感谢白水老师的阅评，问好，并预祝新年快乐。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕林深鸟竞飞

昕阳一片
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Posted: 2010-12-29 21:44:16 Post subject:

生动传神。转结耐人寻味。赏学。问好！

连南河
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Posted: 2010-12-31 06:13:32 Post subject:

耐人寻味! _________________ 一路雨丝一路风

胡恢宗
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Posted: 2010-12-31 18:15:04 Post subject:

感谢二位阅评，祝新年快乐。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕林深鸟竞飞

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