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五律 秋的约会
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PostPosted: 2010-11-01 14:58:01    Post subject: 五律 秋的约会 Reply with quote

五律 秋的约会
--白水为黄洋界老师回多伦多接风而作

白水东城绕,
平湖月柳眉。
晓松镶画景,
早夏谱蓝莓。
有语黄洋界,
相约擎酒杯。
香清堤岸上,
秋色满庭飞。

Oct.,30,2010,Hormish Garden of Toronto(南河书院)6:00 to 7:00 am
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PostPosted: 2010-11-02 03:11:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

可以想象,白水为黄老师接风的热闹场景。
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PostPosted: 2010-11-02 08:11:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水谊深,众友情浓!
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诗中岁月,
笛里关山.
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PostPosted: 2010-11-02 09:49:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

镶名嵌字也能写出如此意境,好文笔
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PostPosted: 2010-11-02 13:58:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

连兄嵌名诗,妙笔叙友情。
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PostPosted: 2010-11-03 10:11:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

呵呵,镶名嵌字,时,空,史,绩,情都在!
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PostPosted: 2010-12-18 16:04:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢大家!谢谢多伦多!

在一个特定的时空中
会聚了这么多的人。

A MEETING PLACE, TORONTO.
THANK YOU, TORONTO!

Merry Christmas & Happy New Year!
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PostPosted: 2010-12-18 18:57:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

嵌名入诗,语出自然。谊深情重,诗意翩翩。
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PostPosted: 2010-12-18 19:52:04    Post subject: Reply with quote

连南河 wrote:
谢谢大家!谢谢多伦多!在一个特定的时空中
会聚了这么多的人。

A MEETING PLACE, TORONTO.
THANK YOU, TORONTO!

Merry Christmas & Happy New Year!
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书院南河一俊才,
成身学问积芸台。
风吟听罢欢歌起,
好似春惊响震雷。

呵呵,南河,如果我没记错的话,
你是细听风吟的专家. 对吧!
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PostPosted: 2010-12-19 04:56:31    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水绕东城,孤蓬万里征。
多城诗友聚,笔写晚秋情。
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PostPosted: 2010-12-23 19:20:24    Post subject: Reply with quote

七绝 把酒临枫
----步韵冰清赠诗


白水东流家聚才,
清风拂面筑高台.
笑聊湖畔烟花庆,
把酒临枫听震雷.

" 明月几时有?把酒问青天。 不知天上宫阙,今夕是何年。" …
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PostPosted: 2010-12-23 19:24:45    Post subject: Reply with quote

qinghongh写道:

白水绕东城,孤蓬万里征。
多城诗友聚,笔写晚秋情。

呵呵,庆宏兄把李白请过来了

送友人---李白

青山横北郭,
白水绕东城。
此地一为别,
孤蓬万里征。
浮云游子意,
落日故人情。
挥手自兹去,
萧萧班马鸣。
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PostPosted: 2010-12-23 19:38:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

冰清写道:

呵呵,南河,如果我没记错的话,
你是细听风吟的专家. 对吧!

呵呵,这让我想起了刚到《酷我--北美枫》,酷我人的接风情景:


"秋林醉忆南河镇,
一路雨丝一路风。 "
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