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鱼之吟（四则）

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Posted: 2010-12-16 02:39:11 Post subject: 鱼之吟（四则）

鱼之吟（四则）图文原创；东方朔南（一）自在并不自由美丽只能定格在镜头我渴望梦河重游更渴望与他醒时牵手我有口不能吼有泪不能流心底的声音永远被透明的世界羁留为了世外的眼神我必须摆尾摇头（二）婀娜被无情的爱折磨美丽被凝固的眼神触摸心被透明的玻璃阻隔梦被水淹没泪浓于血（三）如画浓墨重彩如摄七仙归来是鱼以水为怀眼泪永远不在 (四）你的欣赏我的祸殃你的垂涎我的泪行你的目光把我的美丽灼伤你的笑声是我永恒的惆怅你的热爱把我冻僵 2010.12.16 沈阳

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Posted: 2010-12-16 14:44:48 Post subject:

欢迎跟帖！

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Posted: 2010-12-16 19:42:00 Post subject:

你的目光把我的美丽灼伤你的笑声是我永恒的惆怅你的热爱把我冻僵多么凄美！我很满意这样的心理描写... 自评也是一种欣赏与进步！

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