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雨晓荷微型诗歌一束

雨晓荷
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Posted: 2010-12-11 05:38:06 Post subject: 雨晓荷微型诗歌一束

雨晓荷微型诗歌一束四川安岳雨晓荷 1.春雨没有打招呼偷偷的来把我的心都弄湿了 2.晚风风吹乱头发冷静的大街上一片落叶，和心飘向何方？ 3.小憩香烟和我亲嘴重复的动作不小心把手指羞黄 4.腰疼生锈的关节开始对生活抗议挺直了就痊愈 5.胃痛打工的后遗症生活的玩笑我的故事 6.网恋生活太真实虚构一些幸福的情节感动自己 7.网聊我喜欢说真话网络喜欢说假话网络说我好傻 8.辞工给打工生活画个标点逗号，句号？我不知道 [/b] _________________ 晓荷才露尖尖角，早有蜻蜓立上头！

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Posted: 2010-12-11 14:57:23 Post subject:

精湛，灵动

雨晓荷
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Posted: 2010-12-12 05:42:34 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

精湛，灵动

感谢白水老师鼓励！
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安红红
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Posted: 2010-12-14 23:32:42 Post subject:

一点一滴的构成了生活~~ _________________ 如果不开始，会失去过程。 QQ：3972083 微信：qisebaihuayuan

晴宝儿
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Posted: 2010-12-16 00:50:47 Post subject:

细微生动，善于体会。 _________________ 晴宝儿

雨晓荷
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Posted: 2010-12-16 07:52:24 Post subject:

安红红 wrote:

一点一滴的构成了生活~~

谢谢关注！
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雨晓荷
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Posted: 2010-12-16 07:52:50 Post subject:

感谢姐姐评析！ _________________ 晓荷才露尖尖角，早有蜻蜓立上头！

杨海军
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Posted: 2010-12-16 14:35:23 Post subject:

问好诗人，多交流 _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

雨晓荷
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Posted: 2010-12-17 09:43:28 Post subject:

好的，谢谢朋友！ _________________ 晓荷才露尖尖角，早有蜻蜓立上头！

雨晓荷
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Posted: 2010-12-17 09:43:56 Post subject:

好的，谢谢朋友！ _________________ 晓荷才露尖尖角，早有蜻蜓立上头！

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