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云门寺的脚印
晴天雨天
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PostPosted: 2010-12-16 21:19:04    Post subject: 云门寺的脚印 Reply with quote

云门寺的脚印


一场大雪以后。我的这座山
穿上新装
草木温顺了许多
我的相机可以随意的取景
包括身后的脚印

我终于有机会看看留下的
脚印。雪后的步行者
眼睛感知到自己的世界
是那样的规律
一步一步,从远方
脚印走来
如果可能到达云门寺的时候
一直完好无缺
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PostPosted: 2010-12-19 20:56:53    Post subject: Reply with quote

这个构思挺巧妙的,最后的包袱引人入胜!!!问好!! ok
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