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《冷婵》投稿
冷巉
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PostPosted: 2007-03-17 10:33:54    Post subject: 《冷婵》投稿 Reply with quote
《冷婵》
文/冷巉

荒诞怪异的冷婵正行进在颠倒的世间
它一定不是从阴冷和潮湿中走来悲悯的泪水
仿佛忧伤的灵魂承接着来自佛陀的爱意
那种与天同舞的喜悦正等待着精彩的情节
它是从尧时代飘摇至广寒宫的精灵
它是从七千岁高龄的埙思想中走来的立秋之音
它是因了生活的缘由还是缘于佛学的概论进而波澜不惊
它是长月之中冷婵的化身，嫦娥仙子善良的灵魂
它是在文化底蕴与创造中演奏着一曲冷艳的凄美还是宿命的悲剧
它是经萧邦的万世经典演绎着伟大的天分，高尚的目标，非凡的气质
千年不变的表情飘渺的跳跃在万世不辞的誓言
随风而舞的距离正孤单地撕碎冷艳落寂的埙音
拆开尘封在冷婵上面的封印，吸上一口那淡淡的幽脊、恬淡的优雅
然后把充满温馨的生命，灌注几片友谊、自由与浪漫
瞬间缕缕清香，一种情感，却透心扉。飘动之间一种超脱之感
只一伸手处，却是如此的脆弱，虚无，但又无法摆脱
冷婵只是一堆残存的碎片，经过漫长而烦琐的三生三世
正幽幽地向你讲述着一幅又一幅遥远又飘渺的画面

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沙漠
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PostPosted: 2007-03-17 21:33:27    Post subject: Reply with quote
长句有长句的妙用。但感觉还是可以瘦一下身：）
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冷巉
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PostPosted: 2007-04-03 08:23:34    Post subject: Reply with quote
感谢沙漠朋友的指点。冷巉一定努力，哈哈！！！！！！
问好！
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