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聊墨

白云闲人
探花

Joined: 26 Aug 2007
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白云闲人Collection

Posted: 2010-12-06 18:19:30 Post subject: 聊墨

生查子 - 聊墨潜心素已闲，憩息寒窗寂。意淡自身輕，俯仰忘形跡。粗茶伴翠微，禅悟临朝夕。聊墨草新箋，淺唱随風笛。 _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

影沉寒水
举人

Joined: 16 Feb 2010
Posts: 1145
Location: 中国福建
影沉寒水Collection

Posted: 2010-12-07 04:37:51 Post subject:

这首倒像古风的五言诗 _________________ 诗无涯。思在线

黄洋界
探花

Joined: 23 Mar 2007
Posts: 3301
Location: 多伦多,加拿大
黄洋界Collection

Posted: 2010-12-07 07:07:42 Post subject:

'聊墨草新笺,浅唱随风笛',妙! _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

白云闲人
探花

Joined: 26 Aug 2007
Posts: 3466

白云闲人Collection

Posted: 2010-12-07 08:05:01 Post subject:

影沉寒水，《生查子》的格律是有点像仄韵五言古律。 _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

白云闲人
探花

Joined: 26 Aug 2007
Posts: 3466

白云闲人Collection

Posted: 2010-12-07 08:06:23 Post subject:

謝黄兄欣赏！ _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

胡恢宗
秀才

Joined: 15 Mar 2008
Posts: 564

胡恢宗Collection

Posted: 2010-12-07 21:47:35 Post subject:

忘形留墨跡，浅唱随风笛。朝夕赋褝诗，立雪潜心习。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕林深鸟竞飞

白云闲人
探花

Joined: 26 Aug 2007
Posts: 3466

白云闲人Collection

Posted: 2010-12-08 07:18:44 Post subject:

謝謝胡恢宗和诗！潜心忘形跡，悟得禅诗唱朝夕！ _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

笑聊
探花

Joined: 05 Jan 2010
Posts: 3448
Location: 中国江苏无锡
笑聊Collection

Posted: 2010-12-10 01:06:49 Post subject:

潜心素已闲，憩息寒窗寂。意淡自身輕，俯仰忘形跡。粗茶伴翠微，禅悟临朝夕。聊墨草新箋，淺唱随風笛。恬淡自如，闲适逍遥。问好老师！最近再打一种针，（干扰素）打后就发热。要打半年，每星期二次。故没及时看老师大作。

白云闲人
探花

Joined: 26 Aug 2007
Posts: 3466

白云闲人Collection

Posted: 2010-12-10 07:00:32 Post subject:

謝笑聊欣赏！笑聊，坚持治疗，坚定信心，迅速康复。 _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

笑聊
探花

Joined: 05 Jan 2010
Posts: 3448
Location: 中国江苏无锡
笑聊Collection

Posted: 2010-12-11 02:01:17 Post subject:

白云闲人 wrote:

謝笑聊欣赏！
笑聊，坚持治疗，坚定信心，迅速康复。

谢谢老师鼓励！

白云闲人
探花

Joined: 26 Aug 2007
Posts: 3466

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Posted: 2010-12-11 09:00:41 Post subject:

笑聊，多保重！ _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

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