胡恢宗 秀才

Joined: 15 Mar 2008 Posts: 564
胡恢宗Collection |
Posted: 2010-12-06 19:48:50 Post subject: 一剪梅 · 夜读遣兴 |
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一剪梅 · 夜读遣兴
似蜜香醇细品赏,一鉴方塘,仼意翱翔。三更夜静月窥窗,
寄寓柔光,赞叹华章。 楼下秋蛰奏未央,曲调平常, 音
韵铿 锵。天人合一在情商,诗润枯肠,心沐朝阳。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕 林深鸟竞飞 |
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黄洋界 探花

Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection |
Posted: 2010-12-07 07:20:53 Post subject: |
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"情商",古韵新词,恰到好处。
“诗润枯肠,心沐朝阳”,好诗情! _________________ ++++++++++++++
喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰 |
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白云闲人 探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007 Posts: 3466
白云闲人Collection |
Posted: 2010-12-07 08:01:23 Post subject: |
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描写细膩,诗情悠长,夜读浓兴,心意翱翔! _________________ 诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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胡恢宗 秀才

Joined: 15 Mar 2008 Posts: 564
胡恢宗Collection |
Posted: 2010-12-07 21:41:40 Post subject: |
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感谢两位老师评习,并问好。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕 林深鸟竞飞 |
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影沉寒水 举人

Joined: 16 Feb 2010 Posts: 1145 Location: 中国福建 影沉寒水Collection |
Posted: 2010-12-08 02:16:45 Post subject: |
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挑灯夜读进朝阳 _________________ 诗无涯。思在线 |
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