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七律•约入清江钓雪花步韵逍遥候

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Posted: 2010-12-04 04:13:05 Post subject: 七律•约入清江钓雪花步韵逍遥候

七律•约入清江钓雪花步韵逍遥候舍入人间一盏茶，学来刀眼又分瓜。不宜龙井添新具，独到青门牧晚霞。璀璨天光舒画卷，平凡山色响琵琶。何时解马林皋下，约入清江钓雪花。 _________________ 诗无涯。思在线

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Posted: 2010-12-04 07:18:16 Post subject:

璀璨天光舒画卷，平凡山色响琵琶 - 妙！ _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

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Posted: 2010-12-04 07:48:48 Post subject:

"独到青门牧晚霞""约入清江钓雪花" "牧","钓"字,在这两句里尤妙! _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2010-12-05 03:52:05 Post subject:

问好两位 _________________ 诗无涯。思在线

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Posted: 2010-12-05 12:42:10 Post subject:

含蓄，用典微妙。

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Posted: 2010-12-05 19:12:55 Post subject:

舍入人间一盏茶，学来刀眼又分瓜。不宜龙井添新具，独到青门牧晚霞。璀璨天光舒画卷，平凡山色响琵琶。何时解马林皋下，约入清江钓雪花。寒水兄用典含蓄，学习。

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Posted: 2010-12-06 01:07:58 Post subject:

牧晚霞，钓雪花。均是神来之笔，学习了。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕林深鸟竞飞

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Posted: 2010-12-06 04:18:56 Post subject:

谢谢各位细读 _________________ 诗无涯。思在线

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Posted: 2010-12-06 09:37:36 Post subject:

胡恢宗 wrote:

牧晚霞，钓雪花。均是神来之笔，学习了。

同感。

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