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五律•观看多伦多市雪景
龙图珍
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PostPosted: 2007-03-16 12:06:22    Post subject: 五律?观看多伦多市雪景 Reply with quote
五律?观看多伦多市雪景

临辰倚牖望，遍野白茫茫。或“遍邑白茫茫”。
皎絮苍穹舞，洁花大地扬。
通街铺素绢，满市裹银装。
雪里人车跑，蓬莱我自尝。
注：昨天发的二首《五律?观看多伦多市雪景》以这首为准。
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PostPosted: 2009-04-12 13:36:54    Post subject: Reply with quote
“遍邑白茫茫”：
皎絮苍穹舞，洁花大地扬。
通街铺素绢，满市裹银装。
----取景真实。但应有它处所不具之特色，方是多市之雪。

蓬莱我自尝
----结得还不错。
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