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破阵子 喜看小外孙练习冰球比赛
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PostPosted: 2010-11-23 17:03:26    Post subject: 破阵子 喜看小外孙练习冰球比赛 Reply with quote

破阵子 喜看小外孙练习冰球比赛

恰似狼奔豹走,又如燕翥鹰抟。迫近紧追攻势猛,
防范拦截众力殚。赛场涌巨澜。
冰上速移健步,棍端巧运流丸。黑马冲驰无阻挡,
变幻风云拭目看。竞猜谁拥冠。
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PostPosted: 2010-11-23 19:18:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

生动的画面,喜悦的心情,均跃然词中。学习了。
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PostPosted: 2010-11-24 07:39:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

形象、迫真之赛场风雲,生动、活泼的愉悦诗篇!
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笛里关山.
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PostPosted: 2010-11-24 09:27:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

黄老师天伦之乐。
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PostPosted: 2010-11-24 13:09:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢胡兄,白云兄,庆宏阅评。
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PostPosted: 2010-11-24 17:24:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

情景交融,好词!
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PostPosted: 2010-11-25 07:46:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢吟风道人赏阅。欢迎新朋友!
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