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 Posted: 2010-11-23 13:24:38 Post subject: Ｔhanksgiving |
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Ｔhanksgiving
Let's talk turkey
and give thanks
to those who
stick
their
necks out
for
us
1
讓我們正視
並且感恩
那些
為
我們
伸出脖子
的人
2
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| Posted: 2010-11-23 15:59:09 Post subject: |
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Ｔ 和 hanksgiving 的字体不同，定有深意吧。Ｔ 看上去到真像砍去头一样。
结尾那个“人”可以省去吗？
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| Posted: 2010-11-23 20:52:04 Post subject: |
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感恩的雞
一年來我
招誰惹誰了
誰來tank tank我
嗨, 年終集體屠殺!
It's again
time of the year
I am no divine
to deserve thanks
but, year-end slaughtering?
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| Posted: 2010-11-23 22:40:55 Post subject: |
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Ｔ 和 hanksgiving 的字体不同，定有深意吧。Ｔ 看上去到真像砍去头一样。
结尾那个“人”可以省去吗？
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没有"人"字，唸起来会不会短促了点？去掉也可吧？
Ｔ 的意义，我也在想， Thursday(美国的）， sTick out,
Hanksgiving (you may google it), or a Thanksgiving with
no T (turkey)?
视觉上，我确实想造成你所说的部分（我一向注意诗的书面视觉）。
明天度假去啦，祝大家节日快乐，感恩.
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