胡恢宗
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 Posted: 2010-11-09 00:42:03 Post subject: 卜算子. 故园井 |
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卜算子· 故园井
热气冒隆冬，甘冽迎三伏。槐老依栏伞盖张，
荫护清泉汨。 少小别乡关，古井牵肠处。时梦
乡邻笑脸迎，热送甘甜乳。
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冰清
同进士出身
Joined: 29 Mar 2007
Posts: 1921
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| Posted: 2010-11-09 06:24:43 Post subject: |
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章法浑成，句意联属，形神兼备。
清泉汨，“汨mì ”是否为“汩gǔ”? |
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白云闲人
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Joined: 26 Aug 2007
Posts: 3466
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| Posted: 2010-11-09 08:36:42 Post subject: |
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少小别乡关，乡情缭绪間。一曲魂梦远，诗赋笑开颜!
胡恢宗,好一首情深<故园井>!
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qinghongh
榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007
Posts: 4110
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| Posted: 2010-11-09 09:25:12 Post subject: |
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| 故园井，桑梓情。 |
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黄洋界
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Joined: 23 Mar 2007
Posts: 3301
Location: 多伦多,加拿大
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| Posted: 2010-11-09 09:43:22 Post subject: |
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梦回古井,情系乡关.亲切自然.
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喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰 |
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胡恢宗
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| Posted: 2010-11-10 19:34:30 Post subject: |
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感谢诸诗友鼓励。因为我只会手写，所以汩汨不分了。感谢冰清兄的理解。
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