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酣梦
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PostPosted: 2010-11-10 16:38:42    Post subject: 酣梦 Reply with quote

酣梦中,正在芳技花底,翠湖岸畔,欣赏美妙的柳堤烟水!一陣骤雨急灑,便移步八角亭中,继续品尝雨中趣景.忽然被沙沙的骤雨打叶声惊醒. 随下床捲簾一望,啊!原來窗外正玉羽纷飞,窗户玻璃上,如花似绣,是被雪花敲牖声惊醒的呀! 举目远眺,仍沉浸在梦里的美景之中! 遂执筆赋就一首<宴西園>,唱吟酣梦芳景!
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PostPosted: 2010-11-10 16:49:45    Post subject: Reply with quote

宴西園 - 酣梦

酣梦芳枝花底,香满柳堤烟水。骤雨打叶声,忽惊醒。
簾捲雪花敲牖,點綴明璃似绣。寻梦远凝看,倚栏杆。
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PostPosted: 2010-11-10 19:13:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

梦中骤雨醒时雪,寻梦沉思倚画栏。赋笔西园诗尤酷,闲情雅致乐人间。
向白云老师学习。
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PostPosted: 2010-11-11 05:32:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

寻梦远凝看,倚栏杆。

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PostPosted: 2010-11-11 08:54:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢謝胡恢宗和诗!
远凝寻绮梦,沉浸美景中。
宴西園一曲,寄韵畅思衷。
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PostPosted: 2010-11-11 08:56:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢影沉寒水欣赏!
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PostPosted: 2010-11-11 18:07:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

酣梦芳枝花底。要是不醒来,长睡久安才好呢!
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PostPosted: 2010-11-12 01:51:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

酣梦芳枝花底,香满柳堤烟水。梦境恍如仙境!

老师好文采!问候。
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PostPosted: 2010-11-12 08:57:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

謝君山楚女欣赏与点评!
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PostPosted: 2010-11-12 08:58:57    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢笑聊赞赏!
問好!
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