笑聊
探花
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 Posted: 2010-10-29 03:47:36 Post subject: 绝句-和白云老师《浪淘沙-白云红叶》 |
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白云红叶两悠悠，秋晚登高尽远眸。
不欲飞仙天界去，但求人世尽兴游。 |
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qinghongh
榜眼
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| Posted: 2010-10-29 04:09:18 Post subject: |
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| 白云红叶，天上人间。 |
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冰清
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| Posted: 2010-10-29 06:07:01 Post subject: |
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| 不欲飞仙天界去，但求人世尽兴游。 |
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白云闲人
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| Posted: 2010-10-29 07:00:47 Post subject: |
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怡情放远眸, 世途尽兴游!
謝笑聊和诗!
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诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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笑聊
探花
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| Posted: 2010-10-29 18:04:37 Post subject: |
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[quote="qinghongh"]白云红叶，天上人间。[/quote
问好庆宏兄!谢谢点评! |
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笑聊
探花
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| Posted: 2010-10-29 18:06:20 Post subject: |
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| 冰清 wrote: |
| 不欲飞仙天界去，但求人世尽兴游。 |
问好冰清老师!谢谢提读阅赏! |
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笑聊
探花
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| Posted: 2010-10-29 18:07:40 Post subject: |
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| 白云闲人 wrote: |
怡情放远眸, 世途尽兴游!
謝笑聊和诗! |
问候白云老师!谢谢赏阅雅评! |
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