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今天下雨了
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PostPosted: 2007-03-15 00:46:58    Post subject: 今天下雨了 Reply with quote

今天下雨了
这是初春第二场雨
这次比前次下得多
下得长
像天上有人不停的
往地上浇灌
从中午一直到晚上

下雨的时候
我分不清时间
我把时间当成了雨滴
时间是会下雨的

初春的雨伴着春意
从新春的第一秒钟起
就开始积攒了
今天不过是刚刚开始
拉开序幕

仿佛待放的花蕾
睁开双目
展开双翼
踏进一篇关于诗的
花园

今年冬里经过的地方
我又经过
这时的雨挡住了我的脚步
不让我从这里经过

原本光秃秃的土路上
次时挺起一支支挺拔的绿尖
不但雨滴被它刺得
粉碎
连同沉默一冬的黄土
也因它松动

我以为人可以创造奇迹
人的脚可以踏死一切脚下的一切
呵!我觉悟了
开始赞美春雨

虽说是第二场春雨
但对脚下来说
胜过世间的任何甘泉
哪怕乳汁

当初春拉开雨幕
展开春雨的旅途
也就游遍了万水千山
别夸长江大海
高山俊岭的雄势

春雨只从它们身上
轻轻洒过
万物就会赞叹不休
匆匆昂首

好了
夜都深了
你还不停的下
仿佛知道万物需要
你酿造的爱
将你的爱洒向我们的家园
透过穿透玻璃的灯光
我看见你
仿佛看见世界全绿了。

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一言
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PostPosted: 2007-03-15 00:49:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

看帖必须回帖,要讲道德的
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PostPosted: 2007-03-15 01:29:24    Post subject: Reply with quote

语言流畅,缺少形像支持,继续!
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PostPosted: 2007-03-15 10:12:41    Post subject: Reply with quote

拜读 问好 ;)
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PostPosted: 2007-03-15 10:53:42    Post subject: Reply with quote

一言 wrote:
看帖必须回帖,要讲道德的


这一句极佳。哈哈。

我觉得,不要过多的解释语言在诗里,
把一些留给读者。
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PostPosted: 2007-03-15 11:03:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

一言 wrote:
看帖必须回帖,要讲道德的


Smile 同意!再加一句:别人回了你的,你也要回别人的。礼尚往来。

第一段像唠家常。 Smile
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