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悲蟋蟀
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PostPosted: 2010-10-24 17:24:42    Post subject: 悲蟋蟀 Reply with quote

悲 蟋 蟀

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那些蟋蟀,还蛰伏在《诗经》中,偶尔啼啼月光,还能依稀听见。那些蟋蟀,一跳就跳进唐诗里,有时叽叽秋风,我梦中闻过几回。

这些蟋蟀,躲在开发区的草丛中叽叽咭咭。她们的叫声,脱了一层农皮,也淡了柴烟味。傍晚,城里的人出来散步,在新路上找新感觉。夜晚,城里人出来散心,稀奇这农田的荒草,新鲜这蟋蟀的怯怯私语。

新街在农田延伸……

街边的荒草中,有的蟋蟀跳出寂寞,跳到新街的路灯下,跳起街舞,招引异性。三位时尚女性,各人牵着一只宠物狗,傍着新路的草丛和蟋蟀声,优雅地踱步。突然,一只狗,发现路面上的蟋蟀,胖胖的,就拖人奔去,追逐,含在口中,吞了。三只狗都兴奋起来,三个女人也激动起来。这些女人,以狗为本,帮狗搜寻、为狗指引。蟋蟀,就本能地跳,但跳不远;也求生地逃,但逃不脱。这些蟋蟀,大多都葬身在狗们的腹中了。

童年在故乡捉蟋蟀,他们跳得老高老远的,好久好久我才能捉到一只。但现在,这些草根新一代,被城里的灯光迷了眼?咋这么容易就被兽类吃了喃?

2010-10-12 上午11:13 巴丽岛
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PostPosted: 2010-10-25 19:59:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

蟋蟀,一些记忆,一些美好,离现在越来越远了。
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PostPosted: 2010-11-21 15:59:45    Post subject: Reply with quote

子在川上曰 wrote:
蟋蟀,一些记忆,一些美好,离现在越来越远了。


谢子川的读感!这里不是传统的蟋蟀,是变化中的蟋蟀。
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PostPosted: 2010-12-15 21:37:31    Post subject: Reply with quote

记得童年在故乡捉蟋蟀,他们跳得老高老远的,好不容易才能捉到一只。但现在,这些新一代的草根,难道被城里的灯光迷了眼吗?咋这么容易就被兽类吃了喃?

发人深省哦!!
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PostPosted: 2010-12-17 05:51:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

zmj166 wrote:
记得童年在故乡捉蟋蟀,他们跳得老高老远的,好不容易才能捉到一只。但现在,这些新一代的草根,难道被城里的灯光迷了眼吗?咋这么容易就被兽类吃了喃?
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谢谢166的读感!对个别词语作了修改。
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