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念奴娇*霜寒露冷

田建勋
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Joined: 29 Jan 2007
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Posted: 2010-10-11 22:29:19 Post subject: 念奴娇*霜寒露冷

霜寒露冷，看银河明净，清辉如雪。庭院萧条凝伫处，几点残红消歇。过眼纷华，前情如梦，更奈寒蛩咽。征鸿过尽，万千心事谁说。寂寞难奈空庭。清秋休问，且醉杯中月。老去诗篇浑漫与，愁入仙宫瑶阙。更有谁知，人前欢笑，人后长凝噎。一曲梁祝，梦飞双栖蝴蝶。

黄洋界
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Posted: 2010-10-12 04:52:26 Post subject:

霜寒露冷,万千心事尽说!欣赏大作. _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

白云闲人
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Posted: 2010-10-12 06:32:32 Post subject:

人前欢笑,人后长凝噎,万千心事谁说 --- 通过诗赋抒发心中万千感情! 一曲梁祝,梦飞双栖蝴蝶 --- 張起心中的翅膀,飞问理想的前方! 田建勋,一曲浓情的心诗! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

田建勋
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Posted: 2010-10-12 16:28:03 Post subject:

谢谢两位老师，多指点~~

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