刘芸 童生
Joined: 13 Mar 2007 Posts: 59
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Posted: 2007-03-13 21:12:21 Post subject: 泪相思 |
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泪 相 思
(中国.上海)刘芸
牵手月下 细语柔情
吟一首月如钩
笑 回荡林间
一声 又一声
一滴 连一滴
愕然梦醒 冷夜凄然
忆千遍梦中景
泪 尽落枕心 _________________ 路,在延伸,脚,一直不停的走. |
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赵福治 探花

Joined: 30 May 2006 Posts: 3456 Location: 中国北京 赵福治Collection |
Posted: 2007-03-13 21:41:55 Post subject: |
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一滴 连一滴
愕然梦醒 冷夜凄然
忆千遍梦中景
泪 尽落枕心。。。。。。。。。意境不错。 |
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hepingdao Site Admin

Joined: 25 May 2006 Posts: 8106
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Posted: 2007-03-13 23:32:00 Post subject: |
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古色古香 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫! |
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刘芸 童生
Joined: 13 Mar 2007 Posts: 59
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Posted: 2007-03-16 08:16:30 Post subject: |
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感谢楼上朋友点评,问好了! _________________ 路,在延伸,脚,一直不停的走. |
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