| notcoffee 童生
 
 
 Joined: 27 Feb 2008
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				|  Posted: 2010-10-10 10:55:58    Post subject: 桂花香 七律 |   |  
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				| 空亭冷翠褪無聲 小徑芬芳溢滿城
 散葉開枝誰在意
 開花結果自深情
 朱門壽客難專美
 月府仙株更盛名
 捧出瓊漿济天下
 浮華抖落一身輕
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 云入虚怀无上下 水逢雅境自方圆
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		| 白云闲人 探花
 
 
 Joined: 26 Aug 2007
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				|  Posted: 2010-10-10 12:00:24    Post subject: |   |  
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				| "捧出琼漿济天下,浮華抖落一身輕". 描出新意! 問好notcoffee!
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 诗中岁月,
 笛里关山.
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		| 笑聊 探花
 
 
 Joined: 05 Jan 2010
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 Location: 中国江苏无锡
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				|  Posted: 2010-10-10 20:15:37    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 捧出瓊漿济天下 浮華抖落一身輕
 
 表达了作者不为浮华所累的风范,也显示了作者达则兼济天下的胸怀!欣赏,问好!
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		| qinghongh 榜眼
 
 
 Joined: 14 Oct 2007
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				|  Posted: 2010-10-11 04:21:12    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 抒情咏物桂花香。 |  | 
	
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