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Posted: 2007-03-13 03:58:42 Post subject: 子弹

子弹（中国·河南）安艾君一条蛇在药丸上盘踞你知道我是个病人在幽深的洞里藏一次短暂的亲吻这最后的快乐与甜蜜

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Posted: 2007-03-13 04:14:11 Post subject:

名字起的真好.

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欢迎批评指教~~

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