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动情(情诗一首)
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PostPosted: 2010-10-07 20:05:58    Post subject: 动情(情诗一首) Reply with quote

动情


我总是太羞涩
只要感到他的气息
我就会羞红了脸
像是被人窥破了心事

他在我面前走过
我都不敢抬头看他
眼梢却追着他的背影
心跳像一匹慌张的野马

就算我是一只天鹅
我也只会在水边沉默
我实在太羞涩了
到了嘴边的话都不敢说

嘿!女儿睡得很甜很美
隔壁传来他的欢声
我抬头,欣喜地看见
他凝视我的脉脉眼神


<动情>写作札记: 女性,尤其中国女性总是羞於表达感情,尤其性爱感情的表露。通常是男性想要就要,女人都是被动接受。男人要了,很多也只是顾自己享受,发泄完毕,睡觉了事,完全不顾女人的需要和感受。
〈动情〉此诗,提醒粗心的男人们,对女人要细心一些体贴一些,及时了解另一半动情的时候。女人们更要冲破心防心障,大胆向你的男人说:
我要!
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PostPosted: 2010-10-09 03:18:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

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