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白 云 (西子才萌尖尖诗三)
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PostPosted: 2010-10-18 06:13:18    Post subject: 白 云 (西子才萌尖尖诗三) Reply with quote

白云(西子才萌尖尖诗三)

西子才萌尖尖诗的序:这一篮小诗是西子湖西曲院风荷中小荷才露的尖尖角,又是西湖西山一坡新绿的野山茶。它由亲情的清露滋润,荟萃葱葱的乡情,萌生出天趣野韵嫩青嫩青的稚芽。这尖尖嫩芽的歌诗是原生态的、清纯的、香喷喷的。赏这诗,得小住野茶山,亲沏一瓯新芽,悠然品茗真香,或幽步孤山东,呼吸里西湖中小荷初绽的初芳。
白 云

当晨雾用轻纱的神秘
俏悄地蒙笼春哓苏堤
如深深迷上柳堤湖影
天空飘下了一朵白云

婷婷的苏堤披上白纱
纱中透出灵秀的绿影
碧澄澄的水影中彷佛
静静徘徊着一朵白云

还很小时 我就爱拉
苏堤的这朵雾的白纱
拉着她每晨浏览水滨
倒影水中如一朵白云

让我再次梦入这朵白云
再次跟你手拉手 苏堤﹗
进入湖中水镜 镜中倒影
影中梦幻 梦中的憧憬……

如今一切仍如当年一样
西湖与苏堤 白雾和水镜
还有雾的水影悠悠倒映
一梦天空飘下的白云

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山不在高 有雪则酷
水不在深 有冰则COOL
诗臻神韵方知馨
心有灵馥一犀通
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白云闲人
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PostPosted: 2010-10-18 07:50:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

飘逸之白云,
柳堤春晓缤纷;
倒影之白云,
荡漾灵秀銀鳞;
入梦之白云,
悠悠若幻若真!
酷詩客,西子如诗似画传神!
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诗中岁月,
笛里关山.
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PostPosted: 2010-10-18 17:06:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

如今一切仍如当年一样
西湖与苏堤 白雾和水镜
还有雾的水影悠悠倒映
一梦天空飘下的白云
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PostPosted: 2010-10-21 08:35:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

白云闲人 wrote:
飘逸之白云,
...

飘逸在诗景中
所吟即诗
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