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PostPosted: 2010-09-19 18:53:00    Post subject: 五绝 钓鱼岛之感(新韵) Reply with quote

五绝 钓鱼岛之感(新韵)

中华无底气,倭寇更猖獗。
大汉雄风在,匈奴遁漠北。

新改如下:

中华需利剑,飞斩小倭贼。
大汉雄风在,匈奴遁漠北。
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PostPosted: 2010-09-19 19:08:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

泱泱大国却多次被小日本所欺、、感慨。
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PostPosted: 2010-09-19 19:43:06    Post subject: Reply with quote

真的搞不懂,怎么老是被小日本欺负呢?
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PostPosted: 2010-09-19 23:21:45    Post subject: Reply with quote

这次似乎比原来强硬一点,在重庆"9.18"的晚上,许多民众在广场
高唱抗日歌曲."大刀,向鬼子们的头上砍去!"
亮剑精神何在!
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PostPosted: 2010-09-20 05:36:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

整天抗议谴责
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PostPosted: 2010-09-20 06:14:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

华夏展豪气,巨龙振雄風!
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PostPosted: 2010-09-20 08:22:45    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢诗友们雅评。中华大国,不应欺负弱小,但也不能让强寇欺凌。一味退缩忍让,后果不堪设想。
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PostPosted: 2010-09-20 22:03:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

庆宏兄义愤填膺啊!
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PostPosted: 2010-09-22 08:18:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

秋叶 wrote:
庆宏兄义愤填膺啊!


新改如下:

中华需利剑,飞斩小倭贼。
大汉雄风在,匈奴遁漠北。
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PostPosted: 2010-09-22 08:27:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

记得受到的教育是,没落的满清封建王朝、没落腐败的国民党政府,才会受外强的欺凌哦!

庆宏兄中秋合家欢乐!
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PostPosted: 2010-09-22 08:49:28    Post subject: Reply with quote

笑聊 wrote:
记得受到的教育是,没落的满清封建王朝、没落腐败的国民党政府,才会受外强的欺凌哦!
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谢谢笑聊兄!希望中华屈辱的历史不再重演。

祝笑聊兄全家中秋佳节快乐!
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PostPosted: 2010-09-24 00:17:34    Post subject: Reply with quote

日本人始终没有认识到日本军国主义曾经在二战中对中国人民所犯下的滔天罪行!
拜读佳作。问好!
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PostPosted: 2010-09-24 03:29:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

昕阳一片 wrote:
日本人始终没有认识到日本军国主义曾经在二战中对中国人民所犯下的滔天罪行!
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谢谢昕阳兄。多数德国人二战后真心反省忏悔德国发动二战和屠杀犹太人的罪行,总理在受害犹太人墓前下跪,普通德国人主动到以色列去做义工,向以色列捐助等等。日本人却拒不真诚向亚洲受害国道歉,还每年以纪念广岛原子弹爆炸为由把自己打扮成战争受害者,若无日本发动侵略亚洲战争和偷袭珍珠港,哪来那两颗原子弹光临广岛和长崎?历史上匈奴如果和汉朝和睦相处不反复侵略杀戮,哪有整个匈奴民族的最后从历史消失?
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PostPosted: 2010-09-24 17:04:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

戚旗因未展,倭冠故猖狂。
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PostPosted: 2010-09-24 17:20:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

胡恢宗 wrote:
戚旗因未展,倭冠故猖狂。


文明大国应当是:遇强不示弱,遇弱不逞强。

谢谢恢宗诗友,问好!
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PostPosted: 2010-09-24 17:38:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

庆宏兄说的对:遇强不示弱,遇弱不逞强。 才是文明大国风范。
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PostPosted: 2010-09-24 17:43:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

应该还没到强大的时候,应该会有的
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PostPosted: 2010-09-24 18:09:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

遇强不示弱,分寸难掌握。历史鉴前车,民情需解惑。


初次交往,向您问好。
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PostPosted: 2010-09-24 18:18:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

胡恢宗 wrote:
遇强不示弱,分寸难掌握。历史鉴前车,民情需解惑。
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谢谢!分寸的确很重要。遇强不示弱显示国家尊严,但民间抗议也不应采用义和团的激进方式,烧杀砸抢都要避免。历史前车之鉴值得吸取。
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PostPosted: 2010-09-24 18:29:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

hepingdao wrote:
应该还没到强大的时候,应该会有的
谢谢岛主雅评。几年开发一字通辛苦了!现在上北美枫比较慢,不知何故?
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