| zhangmin 秀才
 
  
 Joined: 13 Mar 2007
 Posts: 450
 Location: 中国.江苏.张家港
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				|  Posted: 2007-03-13 18:27:00    Post subject: 孤吟 |   |  
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				| 黄昏飘落古井 月色点燃幽深的落语
 灯火夸张背影
 狰狞恐吓乌鸦的孤鸣
 沉积的心情聆听美丽的风景
 
 漫步田野
 小路的脚印祝福远行
 孤独的浮云
 飘在蓝天的怀里哭泣
 上锁的温柔随枫叶燃烧
 
 独自站在桥上
 闻着湿润的惬意
 与晚霞携手同一个心愿
 喝下迷醉的微风
 眷恋波光粼粼的秋波
 
 中国.江苏.张敏
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		| 白水 大学士
 
  
 Joined: 02 Oct 2006
 Posts: 14102
 Location: TORONTO
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				|  Posted: 2007-03-13 18:34:12    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 孤独的醉着, 那秋波恰似诗人的心曲 |  | 
	
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		| 赵福治 探花
 
  
 Joined: 30 May 2006
 Posts: 3456
 Location: 中国北京
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				|  Posted: 2007-03-13 18:37:35    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 沉积的心情聆听美丽的风景 . |  | 
	
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		| 上城 进士出身
 
  
 Joined: 15 Mar 2007
 Posts: 2024
 Location: 江夏黄鹤楼
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				|  Posted: 2007-03-17 03:05:05    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 将‘孤思’改为‘孤吟’更好些 _________________
 每个诗人都很重要
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