云马贺铭
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 Posted: 2007-03-13 18:44:25 Post subject: 原创诗歌:画 |
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画
或云或马
画一片连绵的山峦
画一片森林
画两条年轻河流的交汇
怀抱一片肥沃的平原
涂上湿湿的绿 青青的水 蓝蓝的天
画一轮旭日在山颠
画些鸟鸣 画些昆虫
羊羔群在山坡游弋
画一缕晨炊一座庄园
画一个悠闲的我
戴一顶风调雨顺的草帽
领一只撒欢儿的狗
望着怀抱婴孩的你
傻傻的
笑
2007.3.14
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赵福治
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| Posted: 2007-03-13 18:49:04 Post subject: |
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云马贺铭
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| Posted: 2007-03-15 00:28:37 Post subject: |
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多谢楼上赵兄欣赏.
赵兄"灯灭了，我在黑暗中醒着 ......"和顾城的"黑夜给了我黑色的眼睛我却用它来寻找光明"有异曲同工之妙.
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左岸
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| Posted: 2007-03-15 01:35:40 Post subject: |
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疏朗明亮，睿智情趣。
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云马贺铭
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左岸兄过奖.
谢谢.
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