zhangmin 秀才

Joined: 13 Mar 2007 Posts: 450 Location: 中国.江苏.张家港 zhangminCollection |
Posted: 2007-03-13 18:27:00 Post subject: 孤吟 |
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黄昏飘落古井
月色点燃幽深的落语
灯火夸张背影
狰狞恐吓乌鸦的孤鸣
沉积的心情聆听美丽的风景
漫步田野
小路的脚印祝福远行
孤独的浮云
飘在蓝天的怀里哭泣
上锁的温柔随枫叶燃烧
独自站在桥上
闻着湿润的惬意
与晚霞携手同一个心愿
喝下迷醉的微风
眷恋波光粼粼的秋波
中国.江苏.张敏 |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2007-03-13 18:34:12 Post subject: |
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| 孤独的醉着, 那秋波恰似诗人的心曲 |
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赵福治 探花

Joined: 30 May 2006 Posts: 3456 Location: 中国北京 赵福治Collection |
Posted: 2007-03-13 18:37:35 Post subject: |
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| 沉积的心情聆听美丽的风景 . |
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上城 进士出身

Joined: 15 Mar 2007 Posts: 2024 Location: 江夏黄鹤楼 上城Collection |
Posted: 2007-03-17 03:05:05 Post subject: |
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将‘孤思’改为‘孤吟’更好些 _________________ 每个诗人都很重要 |
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