宁家珍 秀才

Joined: 20 May 2009 Posts: 470 Location: 中国黄山 宁家珍Collection |
Posted: 2010-09-14 02:54:16 Post subject: 五律 秋夜吟 |
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五律 秋夜吟(旧韵)
宁家珍
旧叶江南渡,薄霜鸿唳天。
蛩藏归鸟树,藓点落帆船。
影动千川月,歌迎两岸烟。
香风金桂弄,伴我夜深眠。 |
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白云闲人 探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007 Posts: 3466
白云闲人Collection |
Posted: 2010-09-14 06:41:50 Post subject: |
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秋夜景栩栩如生!
問好宁家珍! _________________ 诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
qinghonghCollection |
Posted: 2010-09-14 08:28:43 Post subject: |
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影动千川月,歌迎两岸烟。
好联!
欣赏家珍诗友好律。中秋快乐! |
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宁家珍 秀才

Joined: 20 May 2009 Posts: 470 Location: 中国黄山 宁家珍Collection |
Posted: 2010-09-15 20:35:40 Post subject: |
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白云闲人 wrote: |
秋夜景栩栩如生!
問好宁家珍! |
谢谢白云老师的欣赏,问好! |
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宁家珍 秀才

Joined: 20 May 2009 Posts: 470 Location: 中国黄山 宁家珍Collection |
Posted: 2010-09-15 20:36:49 Post subject: |
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qinghongh wrote: |
影动千川月,歌迎两岸烟。
好联!
欣赏家珍诗友好律。中秋快乐! |
谢谢庆宏老师的欣赏,问好! |
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昕阳一片 秀才
Joined: 27 Mar 2010 Posts: 190
昕阳一片Collection |
Posted: 2010-09-16 03:41:37 Post subject: |
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江边秋月,别具风味。欣赏佳作。问好! |
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宁家珍 秀才

Joined: 20 May 2009 Posts: 470 Location: 中国黄山 宁家珍Collection |
Posted: 2010-09-18 03:17:46 Post subject: |
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昕阳一片 wrote: |
江边秋月,别具风味。欣赏佳作。问好! |
谢谢欣赏,问候昕阳诗友。 |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2010-09-18 03:28:48 Post subject: |
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蛩藏归鸟树,藓点落帆船。
影动千川月,歌迎两岸烟。
对仗工稳切入点有新意。欣赏! |
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SLIU 秀才
Joined: 01 Jan 2010 Posts: 384
SLIUCollection |
Posted: 2010-09-18 16:42:56 Post subject: |
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影动千川月,歌迎两岸烟 |
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黄洋界 探花

Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection |
Posted: 2010-09-18 17:10:53 Post subject: |
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秋夜怀远,眼界开阔.好诗! _________________ ++++++++++++++
喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰 |
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