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卜算子-春思(集句)三
笑聊
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PostPosted: 2010-09-14 22:58:14    Post subject: 卜算子-春思(集句)三 Reply with quote

集宋词句/笑聊



绿水小河亭, 毛滂-感皇恩

乳燕穿庭户。 李之仪-谢池春

楼角初消一缕霞, 贺铸-浣溪纱

恼破春情绪。 赵令畤-蝶恋花



江海寄余生, 苏轼-临江仙

又送残阳去。 柳永-竹马子

豆蔻梢头春意阑, 王莹卿-一剪梅

料有牵情处。 时彦-青门饮
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黄洋界
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PostPosted: 2010-09-15 00:49:45    Post subject: Reply with quote

信手拈来,恰到好处.看似词句的重新组合,实则内容的翻新.
这是一种创造性的劳动.枫坛继盈枝兄之后,又一集句高手.
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喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰
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白云闲人
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PostPosted: 2010-09-15 06:12:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

汇集众芳,重组新妝!
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诗中岁月,
笛里关山.
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PostPosted: 2010-09-15 08:22:45    Post subject: Reply with quote

笑聊兄和盈枝兄的确都是集句高手。
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笑聊
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PostPosted: 2010-09-16 04:02:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

黄洋界 wrote:
信手拈来,恰到好处.看似词句的重新组合,实则内容的翻新.
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谢谢黄老师赞誉鼓励!问老师秋安!
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PostPosted: 2010-09-16 04:04:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

白云闲人 wrote:
汇集众芳,重组新妝!


闲来玩儿。谢谢白云兄雅评!
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PostPosted: 2010-09-16 04:08:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

qinghongh wrote:
笑聊兄和盈枝兄的确都是集句高手。


惭愧,盈枝兄才是高手,我是边学边玩。谢谢庆宏兄鼓励!

拙作《红叶集》已挂号邮寄。咱们都是集句的初学者,摸着石头过河而已。但却是小卒子过河,要直奔将帅的大本营。顺便问候庆宏老弟!
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李盈枝
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PostPosted: 2010-09-16 18:48:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

笑聊 wrote:
qinghongh wrote:
笑聊兄和盈枝兄的确都是集句高手。


惭愧,盈枝兄才是高手,我是边学边玩。谢谢庆宏兄鼓励!
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我的回复怎么跑错了大门?!
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PostPosted: 2010-09-16 19:44:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

李盈枝 wrote:
笑聊 wrote:
qinghongh wrote:
笑聊兄和盈枝兄的确都是集句高手。


惭愧,盈枝兄才是高手,我是边学边玩。谢谢庆宏兄鼓励!
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我的回复怎么跑错了大门?!


谢谢盈枝兄厚赠!
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