笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2010-09-14 22:58:14 Post subject: 卜算子-春思(集句)三 |
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集宋词句/笑聊
绿水小河亭, 毛滂-感皇恩
乳燕穿庭户。 李之仪-谢池春
楼角初消一缕霞, 贺铸-浣溪纱
恼破春情绪。 赵令畤-蝶恋花
江海寄余生, 苏轼-临江仙
又送残阳去。 柳永-竹马子
豆蔻梢头春意阑, 王莹卿-一剪梅
料有牵情处。 时彦-青门饮 |
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黄洋界 探花

Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection |
Posted: 2010-09-15 00:49:45 Post subject: |
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信手拈来,恰到好处.看似词句的重新组合,实则内容的翻新.
这是一种创造性的劳动.枫坛继盈枝兄之后,又一集句高手. _________________ ++++++++++++++
喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰 |
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白云闲人 探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007 Posts: 3466
白云闲人Collection |
Posted: 2010-09-15 06:12:16 Post subject: |
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汇集众芳,重组新妝! _________________ 诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
qinghonghCollection |
Posted: 2010-09-15 08:22:45 Post subject: |
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笑聊兄和盈枝兄的确都是集句高手。 |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2010-09-16 04:02:10 Post subject: |
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黄洋界 wrote: |
信手拈来,恰到好处.看似词句的重新组合,实则内容的翻新.
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谢谢黄老师赞誉鼓励!问老师秋安! |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2010-09-16 04:04:49 Post subject: |
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闲来玩儿。谢谢白云兄雅评! |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2010-09-16 04:08:01 Post subject: |
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qinghongh wrote: |
笑聊兄和盈枝兄的确都是集句高手。 |
惭愧,盈枝兄才是高手,我是边学边玩。谢谢庆宏兄鼓励!
拙作《红叶集》已挂号邮寄。咱们都是集句的初学者,摸着石头过河而已。但却是小卒子过河,要直奔将帅的大本营。顺便问候庆宏老弟! |
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李盈枝 状元

Joined: 28 Nov 2009 Posts: 5987 Location: 中国山东 李盈枝Collection |
Posted: 2010-09-16 18:48:33 Post subject: |
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笑聊 wrote: |
qinghongh wrote: |
笑聊兄和盈枝兄的确都是集句高手。 |
惭愧,盈枝兄才是高手,我是边学边玩。谢谢庆宏兄鼓励!
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我的回复怎么跑错了大门?! |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2010-09-16 19:44:03 Post subject: |
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李盈枝 wrote: |
笑聊 wrote: |
qinghongh wrote: |
笑聊兄和盈枝兄的确都是集句高手。 |
惭愧,盈枝兄才是高手,我是边学边玩。谢谢庆宏兄鼓励!
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我的回复怎么跑错了大门?! |
谢谢盈枝兄厚赠! |
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