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七古 红袖添香 和诗二首
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PostPosted: 2010-09-07 17:26:13    Post subject: 七古 红袖添香 和诗二首 Reply with quote


（新韵）

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几欲飞鸿送晚装
怎奈风高夜沧茫
书稿依旧台案冷
素手又添一炷香

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红袖添香伴君读
青烟缭绕共诗书
如今人去不知处
空留清泪滴红烛
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PostPosted: 2010-09-08 06:25:44    Post subject: Reply with quote
情意綿綿!
sliu6,"烛"字乃入声,与"书"并不押韵.供参攷!
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诗中岁月,
笛里关山.
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PostPosted: 2010-09-08 14:05:21    Post subject: Reply with quote
和上一首：

淡饭粗茶情意长，殷勤呵护吁暖凉。
蓬门洒扫为知己，佻拨瑶琴问谢娘。
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PostPosted: 2010-09-08 18:16:18    Post subject: Reply with quote
白云闲人 wrote:
情意綿綿!
sliu6,"烛"字乃入声,与"书"并不押韵.供参攷!

谢谢您的细心和建议。是我应该注明“新韵”。还请以后多多指导。
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PostPosted: 2010-09-08 18:19:57    Post subject: Reply with quote
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和上一首：
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多谢笑聊和诗。问好！
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