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秋之回忆

辉之宴
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Joined: 15 Jul 2008
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Posted: 2010-09-03 05:12:28 Post subject: 秋之回忆

秋之落叶趟着落叶淋着落叶，我经过一片翩翩的蝴蝶彼岸很近阳光比以往来得更直接时间翻炒着记忆装进明月，一碟小菜吃着吃着就上瘾了我的心开始忽而贫血，忽而恢复那青葱的色泽秋夜情思星星隐去，云掩穹窗微雨，正好踩到夜的隐伤尘埃折断羽翼，回到泥泞马蹄栓在远方没有鸟语不闻花香簌簌的落叶，如我在出门之前，早已被时间无情的逐放流水依旧啊，对岸楼台那朵囚禁在灯光里的翠菊是否是否正在向我张望…… 秋之回忆风剪着落叶雨浇灌着夜色河水深不见底秋来了很久只是我还没有静下来紧紧抱住夏日那场不灭的火灾不想理会大片大片的菊花只是固守着一朵残莲企图用他的芬芳打听今夜的月光…… _________________ `~诗歌，你不要离她太近~.

白水
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Posted: 2010-09-03 13:09:00 Post subject:

文笔娴熟，真情

辉之宴
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Location: 中国湖北
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Posted: 2010-09-05 14:38:17 Post subject:

谢谢白水老师来读！我很喜欢你的诗歌，向你学习！ _________________ `~诗歌，你不要离她太近~.

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