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七绝·云台山碧泉

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Posted: 2010-09-05 02:55:50 Post subject: 七绝·云台山碧泉

七步成诗十步潭，云台飘渺隐诗仙。清泉处处留明月，龙卧山山带玉烟。 _________________ 文学是一棵树，我就是树上唱歌的小鸟。

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Posted: 2010-09-05 03:57:00 Post subject:

七步成诗十步潭，云台飘渺隐诗仙。清泉处处留明月，龙卧山山带玉烟。老弟，如此好去处，好好介绍一下，怎么去？

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Posted: 2010-09-05 05:36:28 Post subject:

清泉处处留明月，龙卧山山带玉烟。 _________________ 好句！

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Posted: 2010-09-05 06:39:27 Post subject:

笑聊 wrote:

七步成诗十步潭，云台飘渺隐诗仙。
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河南焦作的云台山瀑布很壮观，那儿三步一泉，五步一潭，风景很不错，全部景点利用两天时间可游览完毕。
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Posted: 2010-09-05 06:41:40 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

清泉处处留明月，龙卧山山带玉烟。
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好句！

这两句自然流畅！
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Posted: 2010-09-05 07:37:41 Post subject:

景美诗暢! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

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Posted: 2010-09-05 14:25:24 Post subject:

白云闲人 wrote:

景美诗暢!

谢谢朋友雅赏！
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Posted: 2010-09-05 17:44:55 Post subject:

谢谢老弟介绍风光，得空要去游览。

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