笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2010-09-05 05:24:19 Post subject: 集句-无题 |
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笑聊 (旧声新韵)
仙人掌上雨初晴,(崔颢-行径华阴)
鸿雁不堪愁里听。(李颀-送魏万之京)
今日龙钟人共老,(刘长卿-江州重别薛六柳八二员外)
云开远见汉阳城。(卢纶-晚次鄂州) |
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白云闲人 探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007 Posts: 3466
白云闲人Collection |
Posted: 2010-09-05 07:43:37 Post subject: |
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妙集句,灿筆花! _________________ 诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2010-09-05 13:45:10 Post subject: |
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谢谢白云兄雅评鼓励! |
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王国栋 秀才

Joined: 09 Jul 2010 Posts: 295 Location: 陕西西安 王国栋Collection |
Posted: 2010-09-05 14:33:39 Post subject: |
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自然流畅,一个字“妙”! _________________ 文学是一棵树,我就是树上唱歌的小鸟。 |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2010-09-05 17:53:44 Post subject: |
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谢老弟点评鼓励! |
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影沉寒水 举人

Joined: 16 Feb 2010 Posts: 1145 Location: 中国福建 影沉寒水Collection |
Posted: 2010-09-06 02:11:38 Post subject: |
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云开远见汉阳城
怀念的地方 _________________ 诗无涯。思在线 |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2010-09-06 04:13:47 Post subject: |
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影沉寒水 wrote: |
云开远见汉阳城
怀念的地方 |
老是怀念,证明人是老了。 |
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