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鹧鸪天 柳永
江苏卡卡
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PostPosted: 2010-09-06 10:20:19    Post subject: 鹧鸪天 柳永 Reply with quote

鹧鸪天 柳永
作者/苏卡


金榜失却龙头望,

就此花街入柳巷。

自古榜上无名士,

历来山野多贤良。

鹤冲天,笑君狂,

大路朝天莫徬徨。

金樽有酒且自醉,

白衣卿相数柳郎。



苏卡,本名卞筠,70年代出生。1994年开始文学创作,诗歌、小说、散文散见海内外各级刊物。获奖入选若干。为民刊《江苏诗歌》(原《诗尘》)主编。

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通联:221428 江苏省新沂市邵店菜元《江苏诗歌》 卞筠

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笑聊
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PostPosted: 2010-09-06 17:40:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

鹧鸪天相关文章
《词学十讲》
曲子词之短调小令
选调须声意相谐
流丽和婉的曲调
小令短调中的谐婉曲调
【鹧鸪天、思佳客】


又名《思佳客》。五十五字,前后片各三平韵,前片第三、四句与过片三言两句多作对偶。



【定格】
例词:1:晏几道《鹧鸪天(彩袖殷勤捧玉钟)》2:晏几道《鹧鸪天(守得莲开结伴游)》3:晏几道《鹧鸪天(醉拍春衫惜旧香)》4:晏几道《鹧鸪天(小令尊前见玉箫)》5:晏几道《鹧鸪天(十里楼台倚翠微)》6:苏轼《鹧鸪天(林断山明竹隐墙)》7:黄庭坚《鹧鸪天(黄菊枝头生晓寒)》8:秦观《鹧鸪天(枕上流莺和泪闻)》9:李元膺《鹧鸪天(寂寞秋千两绣旗)》10:李清照《鹧鸪天(寒日萧萧上琐窗)》11:朱敦儒《鹧鸪天(检尽历头冬又残)》12:朱敦儒《鹧鸪天(唱得梨园绝代声)》13:陆游《鹧鸪天(家住苍烟落照间)》14:辛弃疾《鹧鸪天(扑面征尘去路遥)》15:辛弃疾《鹧鸪天(枕簟溪堂冷欲秋)》16:辛弃疾《鹧鸪天(着意寻春懒便回)》17:辛弃疾《鹧鸪天(有甚闲愁可皱眉)》18:辛弃疾《鹧鸪天(陌上柔桑初破芽)》19:辛弃疾《鹧鸪天(壮岁旌旗拥万夫)》20:陈亮《鹧鸪天(落魄行歌记昔游)》21:姜夔《鹧鸪天(巷陌风光纵赏时)》22:姜夔《鹧鸪天(肥水东流无尽期)》23:张炎《鹧鸪天(楼上谁将玉笛吹)》
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中仄平平中仄平(韵),中平中仄仄平平(韵)。
彩袖殷勤捧玉钟,当年拚却醉颜红。
『中平中仄平平仄,中仄平平中仄平(韵)』。
舞低杨柳楼心月,歌尽桃花扇底风。


『平仄仄,仄平平(韵)』。
从别后,忆相逢,
中平中仄仄平平(韵)。
几回魂梦与君同。
中平中仄平平仄,中仄平平中仄平(韵)。
今宵剩把银釭照,犹恐相逢是梦中!
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叶英儿
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PostPosted: 2010-09-07 04:11:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

好,拜读了。
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江苏卡卡
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PostPosted: 2010-09-07 08:16:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

笑聊 wrote:
鹧鸪天相关文章
...
信手涂鸦之作,没有严格的平仄韵律,而且我对填词无甚深涉,十余年来总共填词5阙。当时创作只是信手写后感觉有点韵味便牵强的拘泥一下格式而已,让老师们见笑了!呼呼........汗!! Embarassed
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江苏卡卡
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PostPosted: 2010-09-07 08:56:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

叶英儿 wrote:
好,拜读了。
握手,感谢!我对古词无甚深涉,只是随手写来觉得好玩,格律方面贻笑大雅了,96年在安徽《诗人艺术家》上发过一阙小词,不敢再上新帖,默录于后,见笑!

【归国谣 赠友】
心路长,十里相隔两茫茫.
醉后大笑歌狂,腮边泪两行.
醒来自是凄凉,无语也断肠.
千般苦涩万载长,只羡鸳鸯.

记忆中大致如此,希请在新诗栏目继续给我鼓励!
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