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死亡的遐想
云马贺铭
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PostPosted: 2007-03-13 02:28:03    Post subject: 死亡的遐想 Reply with quote

死亡的遐想

或云或马

再也没有什么能使我恐惧

纯净如天空的颜色 美妙如圣歌

像一匹悠闲的骏马穿过静谧的山谷

徜徉在花海 前面是草原

是供我沐浴的湖泊



更没有疼痛和忧伤

仿佛婴孩熟睡于母亲的怀抱

有如黄昏后偷偷绽放的花朵

有如黑夜里烈烈跃动的火焰

我是一朵从未睡眠过的花

我是一团从不曾熄灭的火



永居于月光之下

我仍然是个流浪人

走在纯银的路上

弹奏着生动的步伐

2006.11.10于高一班晚自习
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PostPosted: 2007-03-13 03:10:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

过于传统了,可在开阔些.
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PostPosted: 2007-03-13 08:11:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

三色堇 wrote:
过于传统了,可在开阔些.
楼上三色堇朋友说 过于传统了,可在开阔些.

我认为我能这样死就很满意了.呵呵

微笑着离去 我很满意

我想说
我是微笑着来到这个世界的
可那不是事实
和所有人一样
我也是哭着来到了这个世界
很遗憾 这的确无法改变
但是我能做到 微笑着离去
因为我来过
这一点也不意外
就像我轻松的写完这首诗的
最后一句 一个字
我很满意
然后微笑着揉揉眼睛
我困了 我去睡觉
那么 请你
用我母亲的口吻
微笑着对我说
孩子 睡吧 明天见

我很满意 我困了
明天见
我微笑着
2006.7.12.凌晨
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