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北美枫唱和诗一组 (次白水韵)
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PostPosted: 2010-08-14 17:07:45    Post subject: 北美枫唱和诗一组 (次白水韵) Reply with quote

北美枫唱和诗一组 次白水韵
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(一)
清风送去古诗香,美韵徐吟入锦堂。
四海遨游鹏翼展,明辉普洒诵华章。
(二)
枫林聚集咏诗香,高手临屏会客堂。
多少风华流落去,几曾哀怨为文章。
(三)
诗词曲赋咏留香,亦步亦趋登上堂。
无力回天何必怨,春风自渡化诗章。
(四)
月辉寂寂野荷香,醉酒斜依柳翠堂。
白练当空浓墨舞,幻成好句入佳章。
(五)
圣贤自古透文香,学子莘莘步府堂。
诗韵骚风神笔妙,蜀琴赵瑟乐和章。
(六)
梅兰竹菊沁诗香,月下花前影入堂。
美酒沾唇添赋兴,风流律韵雅成章。
(七)
三月桃花沁露香,柳摇蝶舞影怀堂。
风光缀入湖山里,步步清莲步步章。
(八)
咏梅(一)
淡淡花容透冷香,清高自视表仁堂。
风霜雨剑凭谁戮,尔自升华显玉章。
(九)
顶针绝句
荷风夜抚淡幽香,香立婷婷诵句堂。
堂侧琴箫歌舞起,起吟按律抒情章。

(十)

粉荷郁郁吐馨香,儒雅吟诗韵满堂。
回首平添愁一缕,何时赋出好文章?
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PostPosted: 2010-08-15 18:16:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

韵同意不同。
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PostPosted: 2010-08-16 03:33:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

莹雪 wrote:
韵同意不同。


谢谢点评!问好。
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PostPosted: 2010-08-16 23:59:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

笑聊 wrote:
莹雪 wrote:
韵同意不同。


谢谢点评!问好。
问好!
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PostPosted: 2010-08-23 19:25:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

wow, 砖块换美玉, 赚了 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2010-08-23 19:48:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
wow, 砖块换美玉, 赚了 Very Happy


问好白水!这如意葫芦究竟是谁啊?你喊她“好妹妹”,该不会是荣获“朝阳、、、”?
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PostPosted: 2010-08-24 07:58:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

一组十步韵,
十香香馥郁,
十堂堂风雅,
十章章华容,
楓園漫馨芳.
繁花競开放,
笑聊情挥灑,
妙筆醉生花!
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PostPosted: 2010-08-24 16:12:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
wow, 砖块换美玉, 赚了 Very Happy
偶白水“GG”就是会做生意,看乐得 Wink
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PostPosted: 2010-08-24 16:18:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

笑聊 wrote:
白水 Moonlight wrote:
wow, 砖块换美玉, 赚了 Very Happy


问好白水!这如意葫芦究竟是谁啊?你喊她“好妹妹”,该不会是荣获“朝阳、、、”?

水“GG”的妹妹遍天下,可不知“朝阳”噢! Rolling Eyes Razz
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PostPosted: 2010-08-24 17:38:34    Post subject: Reply with quote

白云闲人 wrote:
一组十步韵,
...


谢谢白云兄临屏赠诗!问好白云并祝早日康健!
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PostPosted: 2010-08-24 18:14:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

莹雪 wrote:
笑聊 wrote:
白水 Moonlight wrote:
wow, 砖块换美玉, 赚了 Very Happy


问好白水!这如意葫芦究竟是谁啊?你喊她“好妹妹”,该不会是荣获“朝阳、、、”?

水“GG”的妹妹遍天下,可不知“朝阳”噢! Rolling Eyes Razz


只要莹雪MM高兴就好! Very Happy Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2010-08-24 19:05:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

笑聊 wrote:
莹雪 wrote:
笑聊 wrote:
白水 Moonlight wrote:
wow, 砖块换美玉, 赚了 Very Happy


问好白水!这如意葫芦究竟是谁啊?你喊她“好妹妹”,该不会是荣获“朝阳、、、”?

水“GG”的妹妹遍天下,可不知“朝阳”噢! Rolling Eyes Razz


只要莹雪MM高兴就好! Very Happy Very Happy
嘻嘻,偶天天如此。
(况且隔着显示器,谁都不知心情如何哈 Rolling Eyes sticking tonguewant to smile
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PostPosted: 2010-08-24 20:45:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

莹雪 wrote:
笑聊 wrote:
莹雪 wrote:
笑聊 wrote:
白水 Moonlight wrote:
wow, 砖块换美玉, 赚了 Very Happy


问好白水!这如意葫芦究竟是谁啊?你喊她“好妹妹”,该不会是荣获“朝阳、、、”?

水“GG”的妹妹遍天下,可不知“朝阳”噢! Rolling Eyes Razz


只要莹雪MM高兴就好! Very Happy Very Happy
嘻嘻,偶天天如此。
...

那个诗配画音的效果还真不错,很喜欢哦。
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PostPosted: 2010-08-24 21:37:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

笑聊 wrote:
莹雪 wrote:
笑聊 wrote:
莹雪 wrote:
笑聊 wrote:
白水 Moonlight wrote:
wow, 砖块换美玉, 赚了 Very Happy


问好白水!这如意葫芦究竟是谁啊?你喊她“好妹妹”,该不会是荣获“朝阳、、、”?

水“GG”的妹妹遍天下,可不知“朝阳”噢! Rolling Eyes Razz


只要莹雪MM高兴就好! Very Happy Very Happy
嘻嘻,偶天天如此。
...

那个诗配画音的效果还真不错,很喜欢哦。
嗯,的确挺好。要不白水“兄”怎么叫‘如意葫芦’好妹妹呀! Wink
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PostPosted: 2010-08-24 22:34:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

莹雪 wrote:
笑聊 wrote:
莹雪 wrote:
笑聊 wrote:
莹雪 wrote:
笑聊 wrote:
白水 Moonlight wrote:
wow, 砖块换美玉, 赚了 Very Happy


问好白水!这如意葫芦究竟是谁啊?你喊她“好妹妹”,该不会是荣获“朝阳、、、”?

水“GG”的妹妹遍天下,可不知“朝阳”噢! Rolling Eyes Razz


只要莹雪MM高兴就好! Very Happy Very Happy
嘻嘻,偶天天如此。
...

那个诗配画音的效果还真不错,很喜欢哦。
嗯,的确挺好。要不白水“兄”怎么叫‘如意葫芦’好妹妹呀!

OK:wink:
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PostPosted: 2010-08-25 12:42:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

謝謝笑聊关心!
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PostPosted: 2010-08-26 18:22:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

笑聊 wrote:
白水 Moonlight wrote:
wow, 砖块换美玉, 赚了 Very Happy


问好白水!这如意葫芦究竟是谁啊?你喊她“好妹妹”,该不会是荣获“朝阳、、、”?


荣获“朝阳、、、”?我还真不懂Embarassed
看看这儿,丢丢MM可爱不Confused http://oson.ca/viewtopic.php?t=24489
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PostPosted: 2010-08-26 19:31:40    Post subject: Reply with quote

果然如白水所说,好可爱的MM。 Very Happy Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2010-08-27 06:27:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

欣赏,问好。
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PostPosted: 2010-08-29 02:15:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

宁家珍 wrote:
欣赏,问好。


谢谢鼓励!问好。
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