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读洛夫《等待报废》
金开
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PostPosted: 2010-07-02 11:54:02    Post subject: 读洛夫《等待报废》 Reply with quote

一轮太阳
在群山的簇拥之中
轰然地
报废了
留下
铁锈一般的晚霞
去黑暗中思考报废的意义
花朵在盛开中报了废
树木以渐次宽大的
绿色,诠释报废的过程
河水,在比河床更宽阔之时
汹涌地报废
花岗岩,于更加坚硬的
内部,爆发出
报废的基因


而你啊,诗人
将在语词的铿锵中
平平仄仄
双声叠韵
与李清照 苏东坡 李太白一起
被历史报废
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金开
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PostPosted: 2010-08-01 21:51:33    Post subject: 式二 Reply with quote

一轮太阳
在群山的簇拥之中
轰然地
报废了
留下,铁锈一般的
晚霞
去黑暗中
思考报废的意义
花朵在盛开中报了废
树木以渐次宽大的
绿色,诠释报废的过程
河水,在比河床更宽阔之时
汹涌地报废
花岗岩,于更加坚硬的
内部,爆发出
报废的基因


而你啊,金开
已经报废于
庄家的监控中
因为,你写的
那一本《发现江恩》
已被庄家发现
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PostPosted: 2010-08-01 21:54:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

向洛夫前辈致敬。
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PostPosted: 2010-08-02 17:37:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

这首可谓老当益壮
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PostPosted: 2010-08-03 03:57:08    Post subject: 回复 Reply with quote

问好冲之兄。你的唐诗系列很见功力。已被我下载学习了。
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