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祁梦君
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Joined: 12 Mar 2007
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Posted: 2007-03-12 23:36:55 Post subject: 挽歌

挽歌文/祁梦君花谢花飞，我看见了漫天飞舞的青丝乱衫。我想知道，想知道那黄土之下，你的秘密。想知道你为什么变成了水，是翠绿的河岸那些山歌，赤裸着双脚用清泉洗涤黎明的天窗我想知道，为什么忧郁的目光里在你向往的那片雪域之上清冷或者迷离的光，在飘落如一只深海的鱼我看不见她的眼泪我是那忘忧河畔的百年柳絮静静倾听着那远远传来的梵音让我抱着你渐渐透明的身躯前行如同珍藏在幽谷丛林的河蚌和风一起，把你缠绕在柔软的草地告诉我，为什么你的歌声象平行的铁轨执著地向着夜的深处滑落你是一只折翅的天使，在所有人的梦里奔跑，却再也飞不回，原来的天堂在我经过的时候，幻化成一座孤独的坟文/祁梦君花谢花飞，我看见了漫天飞舞的青丝乱衫。我想知道，想知道那黄土之下，你的秘密。想知道你为什么变成了水，是翠绿的河岸那些山歌，赤裸着双脚用清泉洗涤黎明的天窗我想知道，为什么忧郁的目光里在你向往的那片雪域之上清冷或者迷离的光，在飘落如一只深海的鱼我看不见她的眼泪我是那忘忧河畔的百年柳絮静静倾听着那远远传来的梵音让我抱着你渐渐透明的身躯前行如同珍藏在幽谷丛林的河蚌和风一起，把你缠绕在柔软的草地告诉我，为什么你的歌声象平行的铁轨执著地向着夜的深处滑落你是一只折翅的天使，在所有人的梦里奔跑，却再也飞不回，原来的天堂在我经过的时候，幻化成一座孤独的坟

赵福治
探花

Joined: 30 May 2006
Posts: 3456
Location: 中国北京
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Posted: 2007-03-12 23:52:17 Post subject:

我想知道，为什么忧郁的目光里在你向往的那片雪域之上清冷或者迷离的光....可以精炼些.

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