戴玨
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Joined: 03 Jan 2007
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憶秦娥·中秋
散瓊屑，穿樓垂巷千城月。千城月，栖栖各地，客思長切。
夢中歸路雨初歇，聲聲碎語梧桐葉。梧桐葉，曉光浮處，露珠瑩澈。
菩薩蠻
冬宵薄襖盈盈女，欣愉噤戰街邊舞。城第正幽幽，霓虹明小樓。
酌醪催客子，爛漫佯嗔視。曉夢忽迎春，欲成憔悴人。
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山城子
榜眼
Joined: 23 May 2007
Posts: 4771
Location: 中国贵州
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城第正幽幽，霓虹明小樓。
喜欢——透出了现代气息！
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戴玨
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謝先生賞讀！
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莹雪
进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006
Posts: 2520
Location: 中国－辽宁·三燕故都
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| 新颖。 |
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笑聊
探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010
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Location: 中国江苏无锡
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| 旧瓶装新酒。反映社会现实！ |
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