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鹧鸪天-七夕兼和白云兄
笑聊
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PostPosted: 2010-08-09 17:29:35    Post subject: 鹧鸪天-七夕兼和白云兄 Reply with quote

文/笑聊

秋意登高赋满怀,
烟波浩淼叠云开。
山岚绕凤霞飞日,
湖蕴潜龙水漫台。


临乞巧,点香来。
家家有女巧安排。
夜间乱舞萤虫火,
默祝今生了愿哉。

注:民间风俗,每至乞巧节(七夕),夜幕降临,街上小孩手握燃香,手舞足蹈,家家门口点燃苟丝香。尤其女孩默祝,赐予灵巧,据说很灵。可惜如今看不见了。

附白云兄原玉:

<调寄鹧鸪天>
极目平野接雲端,
玉帶环腰碧波連.
青峦耸立三千丈,
皓甲蟠龍跃九天.

飛白练,
掛岩前,
山光水色共澄鲜.
一方翡翠镶穹宇,
四面芳郊铺锦毡.
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莹雪
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PostPosted: 2010-08-09 17:49:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

韵美情深。
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白水
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PostPosted: 2010-08-09 17:59:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

唱和具佳
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笑聊
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PostPosted: 2010-08-09 18:36:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

莹雪 wrote:
韵美情深。


谢莹雪雅评!问好。
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笑聊
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PostPosted: 2010-08-09 18:37:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
唱和具佳


谢白水雅评鼓励!问好。
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白云闲人
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PostPosted: 2010-08-10 06:49:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

謝謝笑聊和雅詞!
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诗中岁月,
笛里关山.
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PostPosted: 2010-08-10 08:29:06    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢笑聊兄介绍七夕乞巧节。
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