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秋登兰山寄张五

金开
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Posted: 2010-08-04 12:16:25 Post subject: 秋登兰山寄张五

住在山上，你是个高人兰山有多高你就有多高你在白云里快乐地餐风饮露偶尔向人间扫一眼把天边的树木和河畔的沙洲都看得渺小了重阳近了我很想念你更想念你上次带来的那种菊花酒你从来不带手机更无法收到短信我只好登高，把心事放在一只鸿雁上急急地向你，飞奔而去 _________________ 说能说的话谓之道可道。 http://blog.sina.com.cn/jinkai2010

金开
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Posted: 2010-08-04 12:19:03 Post subject:

秋登兰山寄张五孟浩然北山白山里，隐者自怡悦。相望试登高，心随雁飞灭。愁因薄暮起，兴是清秋发。时见归村人，沙行渡头歇。天边树若荠，江畔舟如月。何当载酒来，共醉重阳节。 _________________ 说能说的话谓之道可道。 http://blog.sina.com.cn/jinkai2010

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Posted: 2010-08-04 13:17:17 Post subject:

古诗新写？看来和冲之有共同爱好

孟冲之
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Posted: 2010-08-04 19:25:09 Post subject:

住在山上，你是个高人第一节写得活脱自然,很好. _________________ 不以心捐道,不以人胜天

安红红
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Posted: 2010-08-04 21:38:31 Post subject:

不知当下还有没有真正的隐者了~~ _________________ 如果不开始，会失去过程。 QQ：3972083 微信：qisebaihuayuan

金开
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Posted: 2010-08-04 23:35:03 Post subject: 多谢朋友们

白水发表主题: 古诗新写？看来和冲之有共同爱好 ----------------------------------------------- 嘿嘿，练笔瞎玩。孟冲之发表主题: 住在山上，你是个高人第一节写得活脱自然,很好. -------------------------------------- 谢谢，请多指教。安红红发表主题: 不知当下还有没有真正的隐者了~~ ----------------------------- 是啊，隐者难得。 _________________ 说能说的话谓之道可道。 http://blog.sina.com.cn/jinkai2010

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