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荒沙夜曲之《水过无痕》

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Posted: 2010-07-16 15:28:44 Post subject: 荒沙夜曲之《水过无痕》

荒沙夜曲之《水过无痕》（一）月亮也是会哭的不信？你听你听窗外淅淅沥沥的雨（二）有人说，月色是一串串失粘的水珠我茫然，张开的掌心又轻轻地合拢握住你滚动的颤栗不是痛（三）羁旅天涯是圆，是缺？夜深深，你在窗帷用执著的目光将我掀倒于是我们就一同跌入梦的河流（四）莫说他乡，他乡太远。我们用月镰收割圆圆的镜片看彼此的眼睛荡漾弯弯的小船（五）你说，在这个世界除了流水还有什么不能切断？疑惑是我借来的三尺月光在湛蓝湛蓝的海面撒开一千朵碎莲记忆如你，忽隐忽现（六）未及拧干这些湿漉漉的文字窗外早已大雨滂沱原野的花儿都笑了笑得那么心照不宣，笑得那么阳光明媚

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Posted: 2010-07-16 18:35:24 Post subject:

月亮总是中国诗人很多联想。有人说，月色是一串串失粘的水珠我茫然，张开的掌心又轻轻地合拢握住你滚动的颤栗不是痛光是粒子，月色一串串水珠，比喻的恰当啊

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Posted: 2010-07-17 17:53:22 Post subject:

问好KINO，谢谢鼓励

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Posted: 2010-07-19 00:26:41 Post subject:

很情怀地抒写！！！ _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

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Posted: 2010-07-20 18:02:41 Post subject:

月儿哭，花儿笑。文字是湿漉漉的，意境是清丽丽的 _________________ 中国山东，女诗人

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Posted: 2010-07-21 07:00:51 Post subject:

张开的掌心又轻轻地合拢握住你滚动的颤栗不是痛 ....诗来自内心.

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Posted: 2010-07-21 16:37:36 Post subject:

在轻中抒情，但举重若轻。 _________________ 彰显自我爱好,弘扬民族文化,追求诗意生活.

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Posted: 2010-07-23 05:40:48 Post subject:

张开的掌心又轻轻地合拢握住你滚动的颤栗不是痛 ....诗来自内心. _________________ 陕西姜华

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Posted: 2010-07-24 08:29:26 Post subject:

充满灵性的语言纯粹而跳跃问好 _________________ 莞君

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Posted: 2010-07-25 19:55:16 Post subject:

有人说，月色是一串串失粘的水珠我茫然，张开的掌心又轻轻地合拢握住你滚动的颤栗不是痛

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Posted: 2010-07-25 22:09:57 Post subject:

啊，真好，我读了就被光包围了 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

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Posted: 2010-07-26 01:19:29 Post subject:

你在窗帷用执著的目光将我掀倒于是我们就一同跌入梦的河流

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Posted: 2010-07-26 17:00:59 Post subject:

谢谢各位老师和朋友的鼓励。生活难免喜怒哀乐，但我相信，友情一定是给人以欢乐的明媚的阳光

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Posted: 2010-07-28 01:52:31 Post subject:

再读，问好了。

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Posted: 2010-07-28 03:52:04 Post subject:

张开的掌心又轻轻地合拢握住你滚动的颤栗不是痛学习白水佳作，问好白水！

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Posted: 2010-07-28 05:44:46 Post subject:

未及拧干这些湿漉漉的文字窗外早已大雨滂沱 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

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Posted: 2010-07-29 05:35:13 Post subject:

在这个世界除了流水还有什么不能切断？经典！为你而感动

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Posted: 2010-07-29 12:38:39 Post subject:

问好各位朋友和老师，你们的友情让人感动，从你们那儿学到很多，谢谢你们。今天我这儿网速特慢，不再一一回帖，见谅。

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Posted: 2010-07-29 16:08:49 Post subject:

我用纯净的眸子，虔诚的在一个清晨将你尚粘着露珠的文字一一拧干。天空微白，有风吹过，读完诗歌，闭上眼睛，我便能收获另一轮月亮。 _________________ 在心的残缺处去完整诗的美丽 QQ：33179345 msn:wuxizhuo123456@hotmail.com 个人主页：http://hi.baidu.com/xizhuo欢迎光临。

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Posted: 2010-07-29 17:08:32 Post subject:

谢谢朋友，月光如水，看来我们有缘

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