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（原创）绝句-和玉儿

笑聊
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Posted: 2010-06-04 13:38:50 Post subject: （原创）绝句-和玉儿

（原创）绝句-和玉儿文/笑聊（新声韵）依韵试和：落叶犹如饯后行，依依难舍是心萦。苍凉去意十八送，含泪梦魂总究同。附玉儿原玉：文/玉儿离魂已向远关行，情愫还在枝上萦。此后妾为天外客，但求绮梦与君同。

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Posted: 2010-06-05 00:34:19 Post subject:

好和好词！学习了！

笑聊
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Posted: 2010-06-05 00:55:01 Post subject:

[quote="老山"]好和好词！学习了！[/quote] 谢谢老山兄雅评！

影沉寒水
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Posted: 2010-06-05 05:47:17 Post subject:

绕心萦绕与萦意思好像相近 _________________ 诗无涯。思在线

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Posted: 2010-06-05 06:02:00 Post subject:

寒水兄说的没错，容斟酌。

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Posted: 2010-07-10 05:15:28 Post subject:

两首共赏！ _________________ 文学是一棵树，我就是树上唱歌的小鸟。

qinghongh
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Posted: 2010-07-10 06:07:20 Post subject:

情真意切。

杨光
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Posted: 2010-07-10 17:48:48 Post subject:

一同欣赏！ _________________ 杨光的语言空间 http://blog.sina.com.cn/languagespace

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Posted: 2010-07-10 20:49:03 Post subject:

[quote="王国栋"]两首共赏！[/quote] 谢谢雅赏！问好！

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Posted: 2010-07-10 20:50:22 Post subject:

[quote="qinghongh"]情真意切。[/quote] 谢谢庆宏兄点评！问好！

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Posted: 2010-07-10 20:51:20 Post subject:

[quote="杨光"]一同欣赏！[/quote] 谢朋友鼓励！问好！

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