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微型诗三章乡村故事

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Posted: 2010-07-09 23:30:14 Post subject: 微型诗三章乡村故事

微型诗三章乡村故事棉花吐出一朵朵母亲花贴着儿女的身体温暖而馨香柿子黄澄澄亮晶晶的挂在村头点燃游子思乡的灯蒲公英嫁与秋风为母亲寻找游子的行踪 _________________ zhchsh365@163.com http://q.sina.com.cn/xyjss

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Posted: 2010-07-10 06:57:53 Post subject:

不错, 可以再简化比如棉花吐出一朵朵母亲花贴着儿女的身体这几个字不要,留点想象的空白: 温暖而馨香 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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