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锁阳台.自嘲
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PostPosted: 2007-01-22 22:52:44    Post subject: 锁阳台.自嘲 Reply with quote
冷雨摧花，清风扫叶，长空雁字行行。
荷塘悄立，谁忆旧时妆？
几欲折枝戏水，又怕是、惊扰鸳鸯。
且离去，怅然若失，玉手乱霓裳。

年来还独处，孤灯照影，幽阁留香。
但说是，围城不入何妨？
此意无人堪解，可怜便、碎语中伤。
一声叹，凡尘俗世，红袖怎轻狂！
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PostPosted: 2007-01-23 05:30:16    Post subject: Reply with quote
再读, 仍感动
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PostPosted: 2007-01-24 10:44:39    Post subject: Reply with quote
谢谢才子光临评阅。
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PostPosted: 2007-01-24 21:31:37    Post subject: Reply with quote
喜欢你的词. 近来心浮气燥, 不宜和词, 等哪日心静了, 一定净心请教.
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PostPosted: 2007-01-25 08:45:51    Post subject: Reply with quote
天。可别说请教。要不暗香就无地自容了。
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PostPosted: 2007-01-29 15:36:14    Post subject: Reply with quote
婉丽优美，情致动人，好词。
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PostPosted: 2007-01-29 20:48:26    Post subject: Reply with quote
谢谢田建勋评阅。欢迎来到新阵地。
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PostPosted: 2013-11-02 10:05:47    Post subject: Reply with quote
“但说是，围城不入何妨？ ”

欣赏。
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