弹剑作歌 童生
Joined: 11 Mar 2007 Posts: 68
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Posted: 2007-03-11 20:44:50 Post subject: 七律 中秋寄北 |
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香气沉沉挂桂枝,凉风阵阵动秋池。
案头新白随霜重,篱下初黄对酒痴。
花好无由争绮梦,月圆最易惹相思。
不知北国飘零者,可是良宵独赋诗? |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2007-03-11 21:06:48 Post subject: |
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案头新白随霜重,篱下初黄对酒痴。
花好无由争绮梦,月圆最易惹相思。
对仗对的漂亮, 好 |
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弹剑作歌 童生
Joined: 11 Mar 2007 Posts: 68
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Posted: 2007-03-11 21:37:16 Post subject: |
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谢谢白水兄关注。 |
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hepingdao Site Admin

Joined: 25 May 2006 Posts: 8106
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Posted: 2007-03-11 22:02:15 Post subject: |
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实在写得高明
再次欢迎弹剑作歌兄! _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫! |
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弹剑作歌 童生
Joined: 11 Mar 2007 Posts: 68
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Posted: 2007-03-11 22:31:07 Post subject: |
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hepingdao wrote: |
实在写得高明
再次欢迎弹剑作歌兄! |
谢谢hepingdao兄,还请多多指点。 |
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