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七律 中秋寄北
弹剑作歌
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PostPosted: 2007-03-11 20:44:50    Post subject: 七律 中秋寄北 Reply with quote

香气沉沉挂桂枝,凉风阵阵动秋池。
案头新白随霜重,篱下初黄对酒痴。
花好无由争绮梦,月圆最易惹相思。
不知北国飘零者,可是良宵独赋诗?
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PostPosted: 2007-03-11 21:06:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

案头新白随霜重,篱下初黄对酒痴。
花好无由争绮梦,月圆最易惹相思。

对仗对的漂亮, 好
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弹剑作歌
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PostPosted: 2007-03-11 21:37:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢白水兄关注。
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PostPosted: 2007-03-11 22:02:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

实在写得高明

再次欢迎弹剑作歌兄!
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弹剑作歌
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PostPosted: 2007-03-11 22:31:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

hepingdao wrote:
实在写得高明

再次欢迎弹剑作歌兄!


谢谢hepingdao兄,还请多多指点。
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