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七律中秋寄北

弹剑作歌
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Posted: 2007-03-11 20:44:50 Post subject: 七律中秋寄北

香气沉沉挂桂枝，凉风阵阵动秋池。案头新白随霜重，篱下初黄对酒痴。花好无由争绮梦，月圆最易惹相思。不知北国飘零者，可是良宵独赋诗？

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Posted: 2007-03-11 21:06:48 Post subject:

案头新白随霜重，篱下初黄对酒痴。花好无由争绮梦，月圆最易惹相思。对仗对的漂亮, 好

弹剑作歌
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Posted: 2007-03-11 21:37:16 Post subject:

谢谢白水兄关注。

hepingdao
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Posted: 2007-03-11 22:02:15 Post subject:

实在写得高明再次欢迎弹剑作歌兄! _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

弹剑作歌
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Posted: 2007-03-11 22:31:07 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

实在写得高明

再次欢迎弹剑作歌兄!

谢谢hepingdao兄，还请多多指点。

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