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七绝 和柳上惠《关云长义释曹操》
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PostPosted: 2010-06-27 14:31:24    Post subject: 七绝 和柳上惠《关云长义释曹操》 Reply with quote

七绝 和柳上惠《关云长义释曹操》

偃月青龙赤兔风,华容道上释曹公。
知恩必报真君子,羞见桃园结义兄。

柳上惠原玉:

七绝 关云长义释曹操

马走骅骝赤兔风,
将军千载尚英雄.
欲知人世仰高义,
须见华容狭路逢.
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PostPosted: 2010-06-27 14:53:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

改一下:

偃月青龙赤兔风,华容道上释曹公。
相恩兄义难兼顾,狭路相逢道不同。
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PostPosted: 2010-06-27 19:03:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

欣赏,问好qinghongGG
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PostPosted: 2010-06-28 08:30:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

莹雪 wrote:
欣赏,问好qinghongGG


谢莹雪MM来访。
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PostPosted: 2010-06-28 13:58:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

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相恩兄义难兼顾,狭路相逢道不同。

把关羽恩怨分明的个性表露无遗。问好!
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PostPosted: 2010-06-28 15:03:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

关羽是性情中人,感性纵贯了他的一生。
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PostPosted: 2010-06-28 18:40:34    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢笑聊兄/莹雪MM雅评。关羽既重情又重义,华容道上遇曹操对他的内心是很大的挑战,捉放两难。曹操能够临危不乱说动关羽放走他也的确是非凡人物。
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PostPosted: 2010-06-29 05:14:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

真心做人


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诗无涯。思在线
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PostPosted: 2010-06-29 08:35:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

影沉寒水 wrote:
真心做人



谢寒水兄雅赏。
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PostPosted: 2010-06-30 05:01:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

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临屏即兴依韵和:七律-美髯公

重情重义美髯公,赫赫沙场显战风。
赤兔雄姿弛千里,青龙偃月掩长空。
飘髯梳理精神在,凤眼斜凝气魄笼。
后世常常交口赞,为人当学红脸翁。
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PostPosted: 2010-06-30 08:27:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

笑聊 wrote:
qinghongh wrote:
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临屏即兴依韵和:七律-美髯公
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谢谢笑聊兄好律相和!
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PostPosted: 2010-06-30 15:55:18    Post subject: Reply with quote

云长,千古“义绝”,其心耿耿,其肠荡荡,其情真真,其志洋洋,不善心计,“义释”是必然。庆宏、笑聊二兄唱和俱佳。
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PostPosted: 2010-06-30 17:00:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

米运刚 wrote:
云长,千古“义绝”,其心耿耿,其肠荡荡,其情真真,其志洋洋,不善心计,“义释”是必然。庆宏、笑聊二兄唱和俱佳。


谢米兄雅评。
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