昕阳一片 秀才
Joined: 27 Mar 2010 Posts: 190
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Posted: 2010-06-19 22:47:39 Post subject: 七律•和龙舌兰版之《好雨》 |
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七律•和龙舌兰版之《好雨》
昕阳一片
涨溢银河肆意淋,洞庭四海见胸襟。
雨帘叠叠天连地,云霭重重日有心。
顿起婆娑垂柳舞,更扬慷慨泡桐琴。
穆公不识箫郎笛,原是乾坤共定音。
2010-6-20 |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2010-06-19 22:59:59 Post subject: |
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禾苗久旱遇甘霖,万物承恩感佩心。
学习欣赏!问好! |
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昕阳一片 秀才
Joined: 27 Mar 2010 Posts: 190
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Posted: 2010-06-21 05:23:26 Post subject: |
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| 感谢笑聊版主鼓励。向您学习。问好! |
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李晶晶 童生
Joined: 29 May 2010 Posts: 11
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Posted: 2010-06-29 07:18:51 Post subject: |
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| 欣赏好诗,问好。 |
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昕阳一片 秀才
Joined: 27 Mar 2010 Posts: 190
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Posted: 2010-07-03 05:27:59 Post subject: |
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感谢您的鼓励。问好! |
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